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I'm the one that fades away
I'm the one who watches children play

At night I spread my sorrows,
by dwelling
By day I am enfused with light,
things happening

Time goes on as I sit by and watch
Not feeling a thing, unseen.
©2009-2010 ~Madkill
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I've written this to hopefully have several different and/or various interpretations. Comments of what your interpretation is would be much appreciated. =]

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:iconsakoz-69:
Well there's a poem I can relate to a bit better :)

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Like it or not, but that's my gallery. [link]

-Handle things causing stress like a dog: If you can't play with it or eat it, just piss on it and walk away.-
-I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every second of it.-
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:D

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:iconxxpoeticlonerxx:
i like this poem. it's quite interesting and i can relate to this as well.

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"The government stole my meds because they were radioactive, I think they wanted to get high...again" :noes:
:iconmadkill:
=D

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:iconxxpoeticlonerxx:
ur welcome

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"The government stole my meds because they were radioactive, I think they wanted to get high...again" :noes:
:iconsketcher7:
I like your writing, I can relate to them and sometimes they are so short and simple but they mean a lot. This one just reminds me of a shadow.

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.....White is the color of purity, for it is so easily stained...
:iconmadkill:
Interesting interpretation =]

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:iconsketcher7:
I dont know if there's a right or wrong answer haha...

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.....White is the color of purity, for it is so easily stained...

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