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slicing her eyes
piercing her skin,
I know what I do is a moral sin

cutting through the veins
painting shades of red,
sleeping with my eyes open

time tick-tocketing away
nothing is saved for another day,
I think it's Sunday

throwing the toy away
soon to grab another,
I must go to church now with mother

butchering another's mind
into destroying it's being,
makes them lose faith...even in praying

taking control
then breaking the strings,
these are just a few of my favourite things!..
©2008-2009 ~Madkill
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well...this somehow crept into my mind ^^;

very nice I think, in the whole..sick and twisted sort of sense :D
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AHHH!! this is totally awesome...Makes me wanna kill someone!! (is that a good thing...?) This is great great great!!

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"Oh dear God, I don't feel alive! When your cut short of misery, will you pray it be the end? Give a look surprised wide-eyed to me!"

~Coheed and Cambria, Delirium Trigger
Very cool! Awesome imagery! Don't kill me! :XD:

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"Richard - this is reality. Get used to it. It's all there is. See you on Monday.
woah!..thanks

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"You're talented, that doesn't just go away. Inspiration is another matter. Sometimes that just isnt there. But it doesn't last forever. Ride it out, you'll be fine" by -PondDreamer
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Best encouragement ever. =]
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Thanks and ok ^^;

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"You're talented, that doesn't just go away. Inspiration is another matter. Sometimes that just isnt there. But it doesn't last forever. Ride it out, you'll be fine" by -PondDreamer
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Best encouragement ever. =]
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I am crazy XD welcome

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"Oh dear God, I don't feel alive! When your cut short of misery, will you pray it be the end? Give a look surprised wide-eyed to me!"

~Coheed and Cambria, Delirium Trigger
:XD:

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"Richard - this is reality. Get used to it. It's all there is. See you on Monday.
the narrator is definately a madman i take it ^^; a mixture of the obvious killing a person and the pretty erratic and random parts in the poem certainly show it :)
i hope it's not connected to you in anyway other than the fact that you wrote it XD

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I hope it's not connected to me in any way as well ^^;
though I still do love that last line :D

Thanks for the comment. :)

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"You're talented, that doesn't just go away. Inspiration is another matter. Sometimes that just isnt there. But it doesn't last forever. Ride it out, you'll be fine" by -PondDreamer
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Best encouragement ever. =]
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no problem :)

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No, it is ME that is Johnny XD
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"Beware of the dead donkey falling from the sky, you can choose the way you live my friend but not the way you die"

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