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Moral Sins by ~Madkill:iconMadkill:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


slicing her eyes
piercing her skin,
I know what I do is a moral sin

cutting through the veins
painting shades of red,
sleeping with my eyes open

time tick-tocketing away
nothing is saved for another day,
I think it's Sunday

throwing the toy away
soon to grab another,
I must go to church now with mother

butchering another's mind
into destroying it's being,
makes them lose faith...even in praying

taking control
then breaking the strings,
these are just a few of my favourite things!..
©2008 ~Madkill
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well...this somehow crept into my mind ^^;

very nice I think, in the whole..sick and twisted sort of sense :D
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~twighlightmoon:icontwighlightmoon: May 10, 2008, 7:40:21 PM Mood: Promiscuous
AHHH!! this is totally awesome...Makes me wanna kill someone!! (is that a good thing...?) This is great great great!!

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~DarkDaria713:iconDarkDaria713: May 10, 2008, 9:40:50 PM
Very cool! Awesome imagery! Don't kill me! :XD:

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~Madkill:iconMadkill: May 11, 2008, 3:14:29 PM
woah!..thanks

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~Madkill:iconMadkill: May 11, 2008, 3:14:40 PM
Thanks and ok ^^;

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~twighlightmoon:icontwighlightmoon: May 11, 2008, 8:09:35 PM
I am crazy XD welcome

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~DarkDaria713:iconDarkDaria713: May 11, 2008, 8:33:28 PM
:XD:

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Vote for Hillary! NOT for Huckabee!
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"Richard - this is reality. Get used to it. It's all there is. See you on Monday.
~shibbyfish:iconshibbyfish: May 12, 2008, 12:41:00 PM
the narrator is definately a madman i take it ^^; a mixture of the obvious killing a person and the pretty erratic and random parts in the poem certainly show it :)
i hope it's not connected to you in anyway other than the fact that you wrote it XD

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~Madkill:iconMadkill: May 12, 2008, 4:18:22 PM
I hope it's not connected to me in any way as well ^^;
though I still do love that last line :D

Thanks for the comment. :)

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~shibbyfish:iconshibbyfish: May 13, 2008, 4:33:16 PM
no problem :)

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